First Attempt
Mar 21, 2018 12:33:32 GMT -5
Post by Atom on Mar 21, 2018 12:33:32 GMT -5
Okay, so I've never really tried to do any form of story writing RP. This is going to be my first attempt at it, so any suggestions and critiques will be appreciated. Anybody can join in, but not too many all at once. With that said, let's jump right in. The basic plot should be fairly easy to figure out. (And yes, I know this post is long but I'm trying to get it set-up to go in a direction at least similar to what I want to have happen).
Atom traveled between Realities, reflecting on his last conversation with his mother.
"Look, I know that this is a big change for you, but this is me now." He said.
"I, I don't know what to say." Said his mom. He had just explained what he was. "But, if what you say is true." She sighed. "Look, I know that you're still worried about what's out there, but can you at least wait until your father gets home so we can discuss this?"
"I suppose so." Said Atom. He looked to the door and noticed something odd. He walked up to it. "What is this?"
"What is what?" Atom's mom also walked up to the door. When Atom got there, he took a closer looked at the thing on the door. It was a small dome, stuck on the handle. Atom's mom saw it as well.
"I wonder what this is." Atom grabbed the dome and began to pull. It began to give, then suddenly popped off, making Atom fall back into his mom, nearly knocking them both over. They were able to regain their balance before they fell and Atom took another look at the dome. It didn't look like much, until he looked on the underside of it. On the bottom was the Haos symbol. He gasped. "What does this mean?"
"Isn't that one of the symbols for that game you're obsessed with?" Asked Atom's mom.
"Again, it is real." Said Atom. "And yes, it is from Bakugan." The symbol lit up at the word and began to grow brighter. "What the?!" It continued to glow brighter.
"What's going on?"
"I don't" started Atom, before he vanished, unwillingly drawn between Realities.
"Atom!"
When Atom had recovered, he was already dozens of Realities away from him home. He looked around, not familiar with his current location. However, the feeling of familiarity resounded within him. "Where am I?" He did not expect a voice to respond.
"You are at a unique part of between Realities." Atom jumped.
"Who are you?" He felt like he remembered the voice.
"Don't you remember?" A being flashed in from of him, revealing Genesis Dragonoid.
"Genesis?"
"Exactly. Now, I believe you have lots of questions, but I'll answer a few before you ask them. No, Realities are not in danger. No, the Destruction has not returned. And no, you are not in trouble."
"Well, then what am I out here for?"
"Simple. When you helped with recreation of the lost Realities, you accidentally boosted another. And, I believe you had a dream about this a while ago before the Destruction destroyed Bakugan." Atom gasped.
"You mean Bakugan World Championship?"
"Precisely. And it has been decided that, in order to prepare you for what may or may not come, you will need to train from the beginning. So that is why you are being sent to the BWC Reality. Do you understand?"
"So, if I'm understanding this right, I'm being trained for something that may or may not come in the future?"
"Yes. Any other questions?"
"Is there anything special I need to know about in the Reality?"
"I think it would be better for you to learn by doing. Oh yeah, one more thing." Genesis glowed a little, and a yellow Realital gate opened up nearby. "You're going to need your old partner, right?" Leonidas came through the gate.
"Leo?" Asked Atom.
"Atom?" Leonidas glowed.
"And now to make sure you can actually work within the Reality." Said Genesis. Leonidas reverted to ball form and landed on Atom's shoulder. He glowed for a few more seconds before it faded, revealing that he had Devolved from Mythical Leonidas to just being Leonidas. "Good luck you two. And remember, have fun!" One Reality began glowing against the darkness. Then Atom and Leonidas began to glow as well. They quickly went towards the glowing Reality.
"Well, with any luck, I won't get Realital Sleep from this." Said Atom just before they entered. He closed his eyes, and when he opened them he was standing before a small terminal. It showed only a few words.
Please insert name.
"Well, any ideas Leo?"
"Why don't you put your name in?" Atom pressed the keys needed and the screen changed.
Insert Gender. Atom did so. Race. It gave a few options, so Atom put in Human. Personality.
"Okay, this is getting a bit tedious." Said Atom.
"Might as well finish it up." Said Leo. Atom quickly put in his personality, then his traits, followed by his likes, dislikes, strengths and weaknesses. The terminal scanned his body and put a small paragraph about his appearance. Atom added that he had an Attribute Wheel on his left hand. Then it asked for something Atom wasn't expecting.
Character Story.
"Why does it want my story?" Asked Atom.
"Just give the highlights." Said Leo. Atom put in the major highlights of his time being a Reality Shifter.
Attribute, Starter Cards and Starter Special Shots.
"Special shots?" Asked Atom. A question mark appeared next to the words. Atom pressed it and quickly went over it. "Well, those seem interesting." He inserted Haos, then got four ability cards that were varied. Then he got three starter Gate Cards. And he finally selected two special shots.
Choose Starter Bakugan. Atom quickly typed in Leonidas and tried to continue. Error. Please select 3 starters.
"3?" Asked Atom. He typed in Falconeer and Siege and the error went away.
Anything else you want mentioned? Atom shrugged and put in Reality Shifter. The terminal beeped. Ready. Character Profile finished. Sending in for review: Atom, Reality Shifter. The screen changed to show a progress bar. It was divided into five sections. The first was already full, and that was completion. The second was mostly done and it was labeled sending. The third and fourth seemed similar, being Review and Approval. The final was Accepted. The bar jumped into the third part, then quickly went to the fourth. Atom watched the screen halfheartedly, thinking about his friends and family back home. Then the terminal pinged. It showed one word.
Approved. One of the walls in the room Atom was in began shaking, and slowly opened. Light began streaming in, blinding Atom for a few seconds. When he was able to see again, he gazed upon a place that, to him, looked similar to Bakugan Interspace, but in the real world. Something appeared in front of him. It was a yellow Bakumeter. He grabbed it and put it on. A map pulled up above it, showing him everywhere he could go. Several words appeared on it.
Welcome to BWC! We hope you stay a while! Enjoy! Atom looked at the ten areas he could go to.
"Well, rules and information seems to be a good first stop." The words registered on the map.
Destination: Rules and Information Building. Transport? Y/N.
"Transport?" Asked Atom. The map highlighted the Y, and Atom began to glow. He looked over himself before vanishing. When he reappeared, he was just outside a building. Looking at the map, he saw that he was just outside the Building he was thinking of stopping at first. "Well, we're here."
"Let's take a look inside." Said Leo. Atom walked up to the doors and pulled one open. He stepped inside and saw someone.
"Hello there!" Said the person. "Can I help you?"
"Yeah." Said Atom. "I'm here to look at the rules really quick."
"Isn't that what all new people do?" Asked the person.
"I suppose." Said Atom.
"Can we get to the rules?" Asked Leo.
"Wait, a talking Bakugan?" Asked the person. "Hm. Haven't seen one of those in a while. Nevertheless, I suppose I should quickly read through your character profile to learn who you are." The person pressed a few buttons on their Bakumeter and brought up Atom's profile. "So, your name is Atom and your partner is Leonidas, eh? Well then. Welcome to Bakugan World Championship!" The person sighed. "Well, now that's out of the way. I guess I should introduce myself now. My name is...
Again, anybody can join. If anybody wants to join in, the first person takes the place of 'the person' in this RP. Again, any suggestions and critiques accepted!
(This is post the Destruction Fanfiction on Fanfiction.net and pre anything else I may or may not write as a Fanfiction on said site.)
Atom traveled between Realities, reflecting on his last conversation with his mother.
"Look, I know that this is a big change for you, but this is me now." He said.
"I, I don't know what to say." Said his mom. He had just explained what he was. "But, if what you say is true." She sighed. "Look, I know that you're still worried about what's out there, but can you at least wait until your father gets home so we can discuss this?"
"I suppose so." Said Atom. He looked to the door and noticed something odd. He walked up to it. "What is this?"
"What is what?" Atom's mom also walked up to the door. When Atom got there, he took a closer looked at the thing on the door. It was a small dome, stuck on the handle. Atom's mom saw it as well.
"I wonder what this is." Atom grabbed the dome and began to pull. It began to give, then suddenly popped off, making Atom fall back into his mom, nearly knocking them both over. They were able to regain their balance before they fell and Atom took another look at the dome. It didn't look like much, until he looked on the underside of it. On the bottom was the Haos symbol. He gasped. "What does this mean?"
"Isn't that one of the symbols for that game you're obsessed with?" Asked Atom's mom.
"Again, it is real." Said Atom. "And yes, it is from Bakugan." The symbol lit up at the word and began to grow brighter. "What the?!" It continued to glow brighter.
"What's going on?"
"I don't" started Atom, before he vanished, unwillingly drawn between Realities.
"Atom!"
When Atom had recovered, he was already dozens of Realities away from him home. He looked around, not familiar with his current location. However, the feeling of familiarity resounded within him. "Where am I?" He did not expect a voice to respond.
"You are at a unique part of between Realities." Atom jumped.
"Who are you?" He felt like he remembered the voice.
"Don't you remember?" A being flashed in from of him, revealing Genesis Dragonoid.
"Genesis?"
"Exactly. Now, I believe you have lots of questions, but I'll answer a few before you ask them. No, Realities are not in danger. No, the Destruction has not returned. And no, you are not in trouble."
"Well, then what am I out here for?"
"Simple. When you helped with recreation of the lost Realities, you accidentally boosted another. And, I believe you had a dream about this a while ago before the Destruction destroyed Bakugan." Atom gasped.
"You mean Bakugan World Championship?"
"Precisely. And it has been decided that, in order to prepare you for what may or may not come, you will need to train from the beginning. So that is why you are being sent to the BWC Reality. Do you understand?"
"So, if I'm understanding this right, I'm being trained for something that may or may not come in the future?"
"Yes. Any other questions?"
"Is there anything special I need to know about in the Reality?"
"I think it would be better for you to learn by doing. Oh yeah, one more thing." Genesis glowed a little, and a yellow Realital gate opened up nearby. "You're going to need your old partner, right?" Leonidas came through the gate.
"Leo?" Asked Atom.
"Atom?" Leonidas glowed.
"And now to make sure you can actually work within the Reality." Said Genesis. Leonidas reverted to ball form and landed on Atom's shoulder. He glowed for a few more seconds before it faded, revealing that he had Devolved from Mythical Leonidas to just being Leonidas. "Good luck you two. And remember, have fun!" One Reality began glowing against the darkness. Then Atom and Leonidas began to glow as well. They quickly went towards the glowing Reality.
"Well, with any luck, I won't get Realital Sleep from this." Said Atom just before they entered. He closed his eyes, and when he opened them he was standing before a small terminal. It showed only a few words.
Please insert name.
"Well, any ideas Leo?"
"Why don't you put your name in?" Atom pressed the keys needed and the screen changed.
Insert Gender. Atom did so. Race. It gave a few options, so Atom put in Human. Personality.
"Okay, this is getting a bit tedious." Said Atom.
"Might as well finish it up." Said Leo. Atom quickly put in his personality, then his traits, followed by his likes, dislikes, strengths and weaknesses. The terminal scanned his body and put a small paragraph about his appearance. Atom added that he had an Attribute Wheel on his left hand. Then it asked for something Atom wasn't expecting.
Character Story.
"Why does it want my story?" Asked Atom.
"Just give the highlights." Said Leo. Atom put in the major highlights of his time being a Reality Shifter.
Attribute, Starter Cards and Starter Special Shots.
"Special shots?" Asked Atom. A question mark appeared next to the words. Atom pressed it and quickly went over it. "Well, those seem interesting." He inserted Haos, then got four ability cards that were varied. Then he got three starter Gate Cards. And he finally selected two special shots.
Choose Starter Bakugan. Atom quickly typed in Leonidas and tried to continue. Error. Please select 3 starters.
"3?" Asked Atom. He typed in Falconeer and Siege and the error went away.
Anything else you want mentioned? Atom shrugged and put in Reality Shifter. The terminal beeped. Ready. Character Profile finished. Sending in for review: Atom, Reality Shifter. The screen changed to show a progress bar. It was divided into five sections. The first was already full, and that was completion. The second was mostly done and it was labeled sending. The third and fourth seemed similar, being Review and Approval. The final was Accepted. The bar jumped into the third part, then quickly went to the fourth. Atom watched the screen halfheartedly, thinking about his friends and family back home. Then the terminal pinged. It showed one word.
Approved. One of the walls in the room Atom was in began shaking, and slowly opened. Light began streaming in, blinding Atom for a few seconds. When he was able to see again, he gazed upon a place that, to him, looked similar to Bakugan Interspace, but in the real world. Something appeared in front of him. It was a yellow Bakumeter. He grabbed it and put it on. A map pulled up above it, showing him everywhere he could go. Several words appeared on it.
Welcome to BWC! We hope you stay a while! Enjoy! Atom looked at the ten areas he could go to.
"Well, rules and information seems to be a good first stop." The words registered on the map.
Destination: Rules and Information Building. Transport? Y/N.
"Transport?" Asked Atom. The map highlighted the Y, and Atom began to glow. He looked over himself before vanishing. When he reappeared, he was just outside a building. Looking at the map, he saw that he was just outside the Building he was thinking of stopping at first. "Well, we're here."
"Let's take a look inside." Said Leo. Atom walked up to the doors and pulled one open. He stepped inside and saw someone.
"Hello there!" Said the person. "Can I help you?"
"Yeah." Said Atom. "I'm here to look at the rules really quick."
"Isn't that what all new people do?" Asked the person.
"I suppose." Said Atom.
"Can we get to the rules?" Asked Leo.
"Wait, a talking Bakugan?" Asked the person. "Hm. Haven't seen one of those in a while. Nevertheless, I suppose I should quickly read through your character profile to learn who you are." The person pressed a few buttons on their Bakumeter and brought up Atom's profile. "So, your name is Atom and your partner is Leonidas, eh? Well then. Welcome to Bakugan World Championship!" The person sighed. "Well, now that's out of the way. I guess I should introduce myself now. My name is...
Again, anybody can join. If anybody wants to join in, the first person takes the place of 'the person' in this RP. Again, any suggestions and critiques accepted!
(This is post the Destruction Fanfiction on Fanfiction.net and pre anything else I may or may not write as a Fanfiction on said site.)